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08
Jul/2008

deep cut in the heart

hello every body here is one more poem written by me
read it and tell me if u like it

deep cut painful....

somethin creaping in my blood
somethin weeping under my chest
seeing u go wit someone else
seeing u and him happily rest.....

confused wat a cypher life is
puzzeled by how people change lik climate
i don know weather to luv u now......
i dont know weather to hate...

thank u so much 4 makin me stand
thank u 4 compellin me to fight
and guiding me towards wats wrong
and diveating me 4m right

feelings, emotions , life , relations
juz a mare game 4 u.....
i wish i too was so dead inside
i wish i was same 4 u

it was said by someone..
and said very true...
"do to others,
wat u want others to do to you.... "

you r goin to get wat u gave others,
destiny seeks payback, and its due
places u hide, distancs u run....
itz suerly gonna come, and itz suerly gonaa get you...

it will make u feel how painful it is..
it will make needles pearce ur heart...
it will make ur life a hell
it will tear u apart.....

you wud hate ur self 4 wat u did
u wud be thinkin bout it
you wud be sobbing all day
u wud be weeping bout it
you wud try to sleep
but u wud be dreaming bout it
u couldent get rid of dat pain
u wud be screeming bout it

and i wud be hating myself somewhere...
coz a part in me still needing u...
my heart and brain playing games....
emotions and logic splitting you
cursing myself still wanting to to help u if ya ask
killin myself taking u through it holding ur hand and leading you

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07/09/2008 14:31:18


king_fu wrote:


ur future is poet



actualy i love poetry but the person for whom i write i think is not happy with me



07/09/2008 14:22:07

ur future is poet




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